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Directions: This passage is an early draft of an essay, and some parts of it need to be rewritten. Read the passage and then choose the best answer for each of the practice questions that follow. When you are choosing your answers, make sure you follow the requirements of standard written English.
There is one area in school where I have always struggled and essay writing.
There is one area in school where I have always had to struggle with essay writing.
There is one area in school where I have always had to struggle: essay writing.
There is one area in school where I have always had to struggle, that is essay writing.
I always have had to struggle in one area of school in spite of my essay writing.
(As it is now)
Brainstorming, I will organize my thoughts, but then the words always seem to be jumbled by me.
While I brainstorm and organize my thoughts, I seem to be jumbling the words.
I brainstormed and organized my thoughts, but my words always seemed to be jumbled.
I brainstorm and organize my thoughts, but I always seem to jumble the words.
as far as I can tell
my mother, for example
No sentence should be omitted.
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